Double (Joe) - 5th

This week we went over our Roxane dance and ran what we had, I think it looked good but was very short and only had about four story telling techniques. So since we had multiple movement pieces we changed one to be a regular scene to bring our story telling techniques up to five. To end the story we also added the siren piece that me and Dan created a few weeks back but adapted it to include the girls as actual sirens, all these added parts made our performance a whopping 8 1/2 minutes long, it needs to be 20 minutes minimum. So I think that one way we can add to our performance is that I can add a speech to begin with to set the stage for the wedding about what is going on and how the people met, I can also add a speech about the curse and what it intails. I also think that during the siren bit at the end, I shouldn't be included on the ship, I should be narrating the last bit and explain what is happening so I stay as the role of the narrator and not become a character suddenly.