HIC Day 18 - Future Scene

Today we created the future scene where the students are out of the teachers control and also where the students are controlling the teacher. We opened the piece with the students moving the teacher every time he attempts to teach them to show their control over him, but it escalates to the point where the students beat up the teacher and have a fight between each other. The teacher then attempts to break up the fight by restraining the girl, she then screams the the teacher immediately lets go and backs away. This is to try and portray the fact that teachers can't restrain a child no matter the circumstances even when it is needed.

I like the opening where the teacher is being controlled and I like the fight but I don't think the piece looks as good as I feel it could look. The transition from the classroom to the fight I feel looks a bit naff when the teacher is standing there with his arms above his head. I would also want to improve the control bit so that when the students move the teacher it is with force and more precise, like twist the body, move the arm, bend the elbow, change the hand, start writing.